(Context: the day before this reading came up, the Teaching Writing class had a fairly heated argument about the role, if any, grammar plays or should play in the teaching of writing.)
Today's readings—Gee and Shuy—are tremendously enlightening in terms of the previous class discussion/argument about the role of grammar in writing instruction. It is such a clearly important and controversial issue at once, and there are pressure and contractions from so many places—tests, administrators, other teachers, etc. Everyone in the room clearly wants to help students become better writers, but we also know that there are administrative hoops to jump through. I think if any of us had the time and the right (small) number of students, and were freed of the outside pressures I've mentioned—nearly all of us would end up modeling Gee's notion of teaching writing/literacy through apprenticeship. We all seem to agree that writing without meaning does very little other than help people pass test and seem to understand a language. Clearly, this apprentice model is similar to Shuy's notion of holism in his text. I think if the scenario were ideal, again, we would probably all agree. But it isn't, and we don't. Here comes real life, as it must. What do you do when the “tip of the iceberg” elements of writing are so very poor that you simply can't get past them as a reader in order to get to that meaning? Add to that the very real notion that after a mere 15 weeks of your class, the university—the world—will expect that these students now know how to write—and unfortunately, what it means to “write” seems to be very different from a popular stance than from what we in composition understand. So the question remains, given all these less-than-ideal circumstances, what must we actually, literally do in a classroom when teaching writing over a three-month period? I don't know...
But I think that some of Gee's more political framework speaks strongly to the idea that we must just 'suck it up' and 'teach grammar'. Aside from the, well fact, that teaching grammar does nearly nothing to improve students use of grammar, some points that Gee makes paint this instruction in an even darker light. (I can't tell if I like or hate that phrase...) Gee's notion of dominant Discourses is of great importance. Every person masters many Discourses—which consist not only of saying the right thing, but of playing the right social role as you say that thing, which entails embodying the right values and beliefs, etc. Our society has perhaps an endless number of Discourses, but some—such as school Discourse—lead to the 'goods' of society. If you master those, you are and will be better off; those are dominant Discourses. They are dominant for no inherent reason; it's more a matter of the people who are already in power already have those ones mastered, so that is what they know and expect. But, as with any type of power structure, everyone cannot be on top; some must be on the bottom. Here is where this view of grammar gets dark. Gee remarks that Discourses are constantly changing, and that you cannot be “sort of” fluent in a Discourse: you are either an insider or an outsider. If you are not born intro a Discourse very similar to the dominant one, it can be very hard, if even possible, to ever acquire that Discourse. But it gets even trickier when the rules are subject to constant change. Gee compares this endless list of endlessly changing rules to a “gate” meant to keep out outsiders. Viewed in this way, the stringent (yet random?) rules of Standard English grammar can be seen as a way to let the right people in to the Dominant Discourse, while keeping the wrong people out. The only difference between this and a gated community might be that you can't see the gates. Again, I don't claim to have an answer to the issues surrounding the teaching of grammar in the light of these ideas, but I know there is something tremendously meaningful here. There is something afoot. Is it too extreme to say that setting up our school system to require the de-contextualized memorization of these rules is akin to forcing non-mainstream students to build and maintain the very gates that keep the mainstream students safe from the former's possible entry? Is it very different from forcing them to build the very fences that keep them out of the places of opportunity? I don't know, but I am sure that this idea merits more thought before we just go with a system that might be harming the very students it is pretending to help. Because remember, the students already inside this metaphorical gate—they don't really need the help with their language and grammar; the dominant Discourse is so similar to their primary Discourses that they have essentially been learning it since birth. So all this drilling is meant not for them, but as an act of charity for the students who are in danger of being left behind. Here's a hammer, kid, get to work.